Whispering in the wind
like a mouse through a house
as the willows and grass blow
the graceful dandelion stays
planted in its final spot
where it will continue to whisper
for a long, long time
4 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Wonderful! I really like this piece. It sort of captures the gracefulness of the dandelion.
I really like how you put symbols on how the dandelion can only stay in one place because it is planted in the ground. This is very good.. I like it! :)
4 comments:
Wonderful! I really like this piece. It sort of captures the gracefulness of the dandelion.
This was really good. I love the voice in this piece. Great job. --Paityn
This piece was really good. Just from this piece I could imagine the dandelion blowing in the wind. Great job!
I really like how you put symbols on how the dandelion can only stay in one place because it is planted in the ground. This is very good.. I like it! :)
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